More feedback from teachers.

I had some more feedback from my teachers on how my magazine was coming along. I got some improvements to do. They main feedback for my front cover I got was that it looked to crowded, so this is my improved front cover.

The feedback which i got about my contents page was good, so no improvement needed there.

The feedback which I got about my 1st page of my double page spread was that the pictures looked as if it was stretched and looked powdery, so i have improved the picture and dont less editing to it, so that it looks more natural.

The feedback that I got for my 2nd page, of my double page spread was good, so i don't need to change anything there.