This is the new look for my front cover. I think i need to move some things around to make it look correct but this is the first draft to what it will look like. There are many things which i don't like about this. I don't like the words about Brogans interview, they don't stand out as much as i would have hoped. I also don't like how close the pictures are, it just doesn't work and give the correct feeling across to the audience. I like the red for the masthead, however I don't feel as if it works for the other text on the front cover. I am really liking the main image and I feel it works well, for this type of magazine.
Hi Annabel,
ReplyDeleteJust to let you know that my initial assessment of your work is complete. Well done I believe that you may be on target for an A grade with this work For both R&P and the Evaluation you have scored almost full marks while the Product is a very healthy 49/60, highest so far. Do remember that all this is provisional though.
Mrs A